Writer’s please rate my story, please note it’s very long. So if you dont have time to read please star.

BlueLucario asked:


PLEASE DON’T JUST SAY YOU LIKE IT, PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU LIKED ABOUT IT AND HOW YOU THINK I SHOULD IMPROVE. iF YOU ALL LIKE IT PLEASE STAR IT.


Writers please rate my story it’s chapter one. I promise youll love it. If you do please star it?

BlueLucario asked:


WHAT ARE YOUR OPINIONS ON THIS STORY? WHAT DID YOU LIKE ABOUT IT WHAT DON’T YOU LIKE ABOUT IT. IF YOU WANT TO READ THE WHOLE THING PLEASE POST YOUR EMAIL.

PLEASE TELL ME HOW I CAN IMPROVE ON MY STORY.


I need your opinions on this story that I wrote. ITS VERY LONG. You dont have to read it all just skim?

BlueLucario asked:


YOU DONT HAVE TO READ EVERYTHING, JUST SKIM THROUGH IT.

AND DONT JUST SAY IT’S GOOD! TELL ME WHAT YOU LIKED ABOUT IT.

AND GIVE ME YOUR SUGGESTIONS.
The Wing Hunter: Can you elaborate on this. I dont understand you.